I am participating in the blogging from A to Z Challenge from 1-30 April, 2014 and this post is written as a part of that challenge. Check out some amazing participating blogs here. My theme for the challenge is 55 Fiction, stories in 55 words. I hope you enjoy my story today. You can read the earlier parts of this story here.
Yesterday he had seen her down the road a few feet ahead of him with her brother and Arun, before he could duck inside a doorway; she had turned and looked directly at him. The hurt and anguish in her eyes had undone him but he’d walked away. She’d sent him a letter that night.
By Sulekha Rawat
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Betrayal does hurt. Lovely post Sulekha.
Hmmm….waiting for the climax tomorrow!
Wonder what happens next!
How hard it must be for him. She at least has someone to pin the blame on.
Ouuu – can feel his pain and hers too … Pretty please make a happy ending for them,…..:-) 🙂
I can imagine the look in her eyes…nicely penned.
Aah! That would be so heart wrenching… for both of them!!
Not fair! I want to know what happens next!
I know, it hurts a lot and hope they can sit some day and talk it out.
ugh that was not a pretty feeling
PhenoMenon
http://throodalookingglass.com/2014/04/yours-tastefully/
Betrayal scars the soul. Such a sad story.
A letdown is the worst coming from those we love.
Betrayal 🙁 Tomo – The epic climax… I am waiting!
~S(t)ri Writes
yep me too waiting to see hw it will end 🙂
Thank you for your lovely comments and I will reply to all of them once the challenge is over 🙂
oh!! Betrayals are always hard on the heart and soul!!
looking forward to reading the ending
I hope this story has a happy ending.
Read so far and now hopping to the next part!
Richa
True love never did run smooth!