Today’s prompt is by Vidya Sury on Write Tribe.
Often called “micro” or “nano” fiction 55 fiction is the art of creating a complete short story in exactly 55 words, no more, no less. Not an essay, not a poem, not a bunch of random thoughts, no musings. Just a potent piece of pure fiction that you’ve dexterously composed in 55 words.
This is my entry
She had smelt the other woman on him last night but had decided to keep quiet and make plans to walk out of this marriage ASAP. She suggested a holiday to a hill station and he agreed to go maybe out of guilt. They hiked up the hill together but only she came down, smiling.
Sulekha aka Lucks
Perfect! and walk out she did:)
Hey Vinaya, thanks for visiting and for your lovely comment. 🙂
Haha…..What a fruitful walk, indeed! 😉
🙂 I knew the ladies in our group would love the ending 🙂 Thanks
Oh My!! Didn't see this coming! A wonderful 55er!!
Thanks Shilpa, aren't we resourceful? 🙂
OMG!!
She does not only walk out of their marriage but also kicked him out from her life!!
Enjoyed this one 😀
Cheers!
Thanks Simran, enjoyed reading your comment.
I am too scared to ever got on the wrong side of U, Sulekha 😛
Hey, I was writing pure fiction 🙂
Phew, that's one avenger! Nicely done in 55 words.
Thank you, I am dangerous 🙂
Mission accomplished I say!
Yessss, thanks 🙂
Neat. No loose ends. 🙂
Should there ever be? Thanks
This is wonderful , revengeful and vengeful 🙂
good one sulekha
Thank you so much for liking my crazy story 🙂
Oh!!! Serves him right!! LOVE it and did not expect that ending at all. This was perfectly brilliant!!!
Kathy, we do come up with creative pieces, right? thanks
Ooh… intriguing! I wonder what the woman did. But whatever it is, I'm pretty sure that it served him right! Loved this, Sulekha! Great job! 🙂
~Irene
She kicked him out of her life, for good 🙂
A woman with a clear decision………..loved your story 🙂
Loved your compliment 🙂
Wow ! Good decision I tell you ! Loved this 55er !
Thanks Ruchira 🙂
Wow!
Thanks Mitr
wow! That's intriguing, Sulekha:) Love the thrilling and intelligent touch u gave. It's ma fav 55-er:)
Welcome to my blog, Vishal. Thanks for the compliment, my story is titled 'A woman scorned' 🙂
haha me likes this 🙂
Richa
Me too 🙂 thanks Richa.