55 Fiction – A woman scorned

Today’s prompt is by Vidya Sury on Write Tribe.

Often called “micro” or “nano” fiction 55 fiction is the art of creating a complete short story in exactly 55 words, no more, no less.  Not an essay, not a poem, not a bunch of random thoughts, no musings. Just a potent piece of pure fiction that you’ve dexterously composed in 55 words.

This is my entry

She had smelt the other woman on him last night but had decided to keep quiet and make plans to walk out of this marriage ASAP. She suggested a holiday to a hill station and he agreed to go maybe out of guilt. They hiked up the hill together but only she came down, smiling.


Sulekha aka Lucks


32 thoughts on “55 Fiction – A woman scorned

  1. Ooh… intriguing! I wonder what the woman did. But whatever it is, I'm pretty sure that it served him right! Loved this, Sulekha! Great job! 🙂


  2. wow! That's intriguing, Sulekha:) Love the thrilling and intelligent touch u gave. It's ma fav 55-er:)

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