Raindrops on rooftops make a din
Egged on by lightning and thunder
Making the house tremble
There was a crime committed here
Concealed by nature’s raw fury
The walls silently scream
The assault ceased mercifully
Golden sunshine bathed everything
She survived, thankfully
Cowards emerge out of shadows
Slink away into the darkness
Leave destruction behind
Her clothes in tatters hang thin
The bleeding lip and swollen jaw
A harrowing tale, tell
Pain and suffering don’t faze her
She wants Justice and dignity
Her will is unbroken
Rising like a Phoenix, she walks
Shielding her eyes from the sun, bright
A fire in her eyes.
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Wonderful play of words to depict assault on a woman. A lot has been cnveyed in very few lines. This poem has depth.
Janaki, your words made my day. Thank you
This hits where it hurts the most! Loved this poignant ode to the pheonix inside everyone that unfailingly rises everytime from the ashes and creates a new life.
Deepa, right? Thanks a ton.
A powerful poem that handles a difficult subject with restraint and clarity. The imagery of the storm beautifully mirrors the violence she has endured, while the ending leaves us with a strong sense of courage and hope. The simple, direct language makes the poem all the more impactful.
Deepika, thank you so much for your insightful comment on my poem. I struggled a lot while writing it just so.
You wrote it so beautifully and loved the last line ❤️
Thank you.
A powerful poem about resilience and strength. And I loved the imagery that you have beautifully showcased in the poem.
Chinmayee, it’s nice to read such beautiful words about your poem. Thank you.