Blogging from A to Z April Challenge
Today’s alphabet is G and my story begins with it.
Groaning with hurt and pain, he closed his eyes and reached his happy place where Sia was waiting for him. Shiva let the dreams take over from harsh reality and opened his arms wide, inviting her to run into them with abandon. Their embrace lasted an eternity; the kiss that followed drew his soul out.
By Sulekha Rawat
I am participating in the blogging from A to Z Challenge from 1-30 April, 2014 and this post is written as a part of that challenge. Check out some amazing participating blogs here. My theme for the challenge is 55 Fiction, stories in 55 words. I hope you enjoyed my story today.
Peace and togetherness after death? I know she has gone but I really want them to be together…that kiss never ending…
Beautifully written 🙂 Kiss drew his soul out? Literally? Oh.. can't wait for the next one!
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few sentences … but says a lot …
His soul is at peace, I can tell. But, is this the end of the tale then, Sulekha? Can't wait for tomorrow!
This one can grab attention..
Awesome!!! I was struggling so much to comment and this tech error.. phew.. I was so so so in love with your post that's why I couldn't log out without commenting!!! A lot of emotions in such a small post!! *cheers and hugs*
~S(t)ri
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Smile, it makes (y)our day!
Was this in a dream or after death? Beautifully written again
Random Thoughts Naba
Wow! This can't be the end, can it? These 55'ers can kill with their suspense. Waiting for the next instalment..
you do it in so few words..I wonder what would you do if I gave you a book to write
woww that ending lines are marvellous 🙂
Yeah that last line is truly lovely.
“Their embrace lasted an eternity; the kiss that followed drew his soul out”… this is intriguing!! Cant wait for 12 tonight!
Cant wait for the next 100 words to see what happens!
beautifully written 🙂 so many emotions packed in such a short story!
Awesome…such a beautiful piece…I love love stories 🙂
WOW, love for all eternity.
Beautiful that they can come together in eternity! Now that is a happy ever after love story! ♥
Beautifully written.. and also a bit sad.. Wonder what happens next …
Beautiful – is he dreaming or are they in that eternal place?