Countless – A Story

I am participating in the Blogging from A to Z April Challenge all this month.

Today’s alphabet is C. My 55 fiction begins with this cute letter ‘C’

Countless - A Story #AtoZchallenge @sulekkha

Countless emotions clouded his heart and mind during that brief instant he was submerged in the waters. He heard her smile, saw her laughter, smelt her touch and touched her affectionate scent. She was with him in his watery grave while he had abandoned her on a bright and sunny day. She had loved him.

 

By Sulekha Rawat

I am participating in the blogging from A to Z Challenge from 1-30 April, 2014 and this post is written as a part of that challenge. Check out some amazing participating blogs here. My theme for the challenge is 55 Fiction, stories in 55 words. I hope you enjoyed my story today.

 

57 Comments

    • S(t)ri

      That is one lovely song! Trust me, as soon as I read this post I got reminded of this song only 🙂 Thanks for the link!

      ~S(t)ri
      Participant|AtoZ Challenge 2014
      Smile, it makes (y)our day!

  1. eliexpat

    Oh Sulekha., very emotional post today. I wanted to stretch out my hand and dragged him out of the water… You have an amazing way with words, lady:-) Way to go!

  2. S(t)ri

    Very emotional. This particular post made my heart skip a beat 🙁

    ~S(t)ri
    Participant|AtoZ Challenge 2014
    Smile, it makes (y)our day!

  3. beloome

    "He heard her smile, saw her laughter, smelt her touch and touched her affectionate scent." — this is so Gulzar-like! Great line. Speaks so much of love, and lovingly.

  4. obsessivemom

    How sad is this!! I have often wondered what people think while they're drowning – images of people they love would surely be in their minds. Your protagonist seems to be dealing with heavy guilt.

    • sulekharawat

      He is literally drowning in guilt… I wonder too about how they must feel before they lose consciousness 🙁

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