UNHINGED
My feelings for you are unalterable,
unaccompanied,
by fear of abandonment.
I am unafraid to show you I care,
I am unarmed by your charm,
Unashamed, I blow kisses at you,
Unasked, I miss you.
My love is unassailable.
You live in my unassuming heart,
unbeknown to the world.
Unbidden your thoughts,
come to my mind,
unblemished your memories.
So uncanny is our bond.
Unconventional is our relationship,
uncompromising in its intensity.
My undying devotion.
My unfailing admiration.
I am vindicated in my quest for love,
I am in a stupor.
You undo my heartstrings,
You UNHINGE me.
Sulekha Rawat
Oh Sulekha, these are words of love any person wants to hear! This post is so beautiful and heartfelt. Reading your work, I can tell you have so much love to give. 🙂
Irene, welome to my site and thank you for the lovely compliment.
Oh why do they unhinge us? Lovely Outlier.
Love is a complicated emotion and does strange things to people, life goes on though 🙂
Dear Sulekha,
These words fill me up with so much joy, because I know very well from whence they come. To surrender completely to love is like nothing else in life. It can indeed to interpreted as Godly devotion. Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Under A Celestial Dawn
Andy, Thank you for comparing my poem to a prayer, appreciate your words.
Good one! I like your use of the prefix "un" as a recurring theme in the poem. Not something I'd have thought of, but it really works here.
Chris, Thank you for your visit and comment. I am glad you liked the use of UN in my poem 🙂
I like the "uns" too, Sulekha. ;p Lovely write.
Sweepy, thank you so much.
Powerless before the one we love… melting LOL…
Loved this Sulekha…you're inspired 😉