Silence is the loudest scream,
in the confines of a lonely heart,
Sometimes you need to speak,
to make yourself understood.
Nothing hurts more than your silence,
It grips my heart in its vice-like hold,
rips apart the remnants of my soul,
with its quiet undertones.
I try to placate my heart, and reason,
I can’t hear you above the din of my,
thoughts and feelings for you.
My jumbled up wishes and desires,
are drowning out your words.
The sound of your voice,
Is unable to reach my parched ears.
Sometimes I can hear your heart beat,
From a thousand miles away.
When it happens, I know that,
You are thinking of me. I feel.
A touch of the wind,
kiss of the sun, and hear,
the twinkling of the stars.
At times when I am sad and lonely,
I feel a warm touch on my soul.
It’s when I cross your mind, and you,
Whisper my name in your sleep.
I feel your name is mine to keep,
Your memory is my keepsake.
Though I think of you night and day,
I was yours for Namesake.
Lucks aka Sulekha
beautiful Lucky… esp, the last paragraph is really gripping to the core!!! loved it my friend…
Thanks Sheba, treasure your compliments. Aren't you working today?
Sulekkha your one of the ones that makes this an interesting journey for me each day. I want to read more and know more about you. Excellent
My jumbled up wishes and desires,
are drowning out your words.
The sound of your voice,
Is unable to reach my parched ears.
JIm
Thank you so much, Jim. I really appreciate your comments on my blog, thank you.
Beautiful Outlier."I was yours for namesake" Wow!
Thanks Rimly, it was spur of the moment thing..
This is a comment by Preetu Dave,
" Mesmerizing word play – Lucks – I have to dig inside my school memorabilia – locate my favorite little red Oxford dictionary – juggle it up & find new words to express my feelings for your renditions. Superbly written – the way Only you can. Loved it ! Keep up the awesomeness "
Thanks a ton for the most beautiful compliment ever, Preetu.
Can it get any better than this,Sulekha? I absolutely loved it. I'll call this 'my poem' for you have reflected my anguish…
All of us are fools in love, Eva. Thanks for the beautiful compliment.
Love the poem.
Silence is the loudest scream to a lonely heart. This sentence says it all. How fascinating and intriguing your writing can be.
Thanks a ton, sandy. Welcome to my blog and thanks for the follow.
Hey YogaSavy, thank you so much for the compliment.
Beautiful poem…Like like superlike 😀
Though I think of you night and day,
I was yours for Namesake.
Outstanding…loved it,Sulekha
This is awesome Mitr. Loved it like crazy. You are just incredible.
Your words always move me and get me thinking about life in a good way. Looking forward to more of your insight 🙂
Wow Lucks….fantastic!! I'm sooo proud of you Madam!!
Beautifully written, very insightful…love reading it.. : )
"Your memory is my keepsake" Awww! Lovely and beautifully written…:)
@Aabhisek, thank you so much for the lovely super like comment.
@Motifs, Love it when you guys come visit my blog and comment.Thanks Alpana.
@Mitr, we are birds of a feather:) thanks.
@David, Even your comments are pure poetry, thanks.
@Swati, thanks a ton and I am so glad we met online and will definitely meet in person soon.
@Angel Eyes, welcome to my blog and love your compliment.Thanks.
@Jorie, thank you for the sweet compliment.
Hi! Your blog's been tagged as "Blog of the Week" from 23 March to 30 March. Do keep your great posts coming!
Cheers – Dora
http://pandorapoikilos.com
Wow, Pandora..thanks a ton,you have made my day.Love you.
Wow!!
This is just Awesome!!
Felt each and every word 🙂
I am your new follower ..So, Cheers 🙂
Simran.
Hey Simran, thank you so much for the compliment. Welcome to my blog.
Thank god I came across ur blog.. A poem like this can make anyone's day! 🙂 Hey Lucks I share the same passion as u.. do visit my blog..
wid tons of wishes..
Monu 🙂
Thanks a lot, Monu and welcome to my blog.Will surely visit your blog soon.