#100WordsonSaturday 1 August 2015
Today’s prompt: Use this start to continue a story : I noticed the old man sitting on a park bench sobbing his eyes out….
I noticed the old man sitting on a park bench sobbing his eyes out. He held a paper in his hands, as I drew closer I read the word, cancer, and knew I was at the right place; he was going with me today.
He took out a photograph from his wallet and kissed it. I leaned forward to get a better look at it and found myself staring at my picture from last year. It was taken on the fateful day of my accident.
I held out my hand and whispered, “Papa, I’ve come to take you with me.”
By Sulekha Rawat
Oh! That’s a sad one and a bit spooky too!
A bit spooky!! But I liked the twist!
Spooky and sad at the same time..wonderful though, the end
That’s sad. But brilliantly written!
Oh! sad.. but wouldnt it be nice, our loved ones will come to take us.
Ouch..! That hurts..
But brilliantly written..
Cheers
Beautiful story Sulekha.
Oh, that was really sad, and a bit scary, too!
Oops! I freaked out a bit but loved the twist in tale 🙂 Good one!
I succeeded :)thanks