The NaPoWriMo challenge is to write a poem a day for the month of April.
As she flits across your mind,
she leaves a bit of her soul behind.
Her touch lingers on your heart,
from here, she never wants to depart.
As she gets entangled in your thoughts,
and runs her fingers through your dreams.
She is making memories to keep herself warm,
on long, dark and lonely winter nights.
Let her kiss your fantasies,
and embrace your ecstasies.
She is merely crossing your mind,
for a brief moment in time.
Sulekha Rawat
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Hats off!!!! Spell bound.
Thank you, Janaki.
OMG that takes my breath away!!!!!! Don't know what else to say… I think its your best so far
Mitr, <3 thanks a ton for your OMG compliment <3
wow..you are getting better by the day
Thanks Priyashmita, loved your story too.
Just marvelous! Well done!!!
Martha, Thank you for your lovely compliments.
It's the aftertaste that we recall…
Yes we do that, welcome and thanks.
A true love is never forgotten. Really dig this Sulekha!
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Tameka, aren't we haven't fun in this poetry hop? Love it. Thanks
Lovely.
Thanks Chris.
Hello Sulekha.
And for the brief moment in time she crosses your mind, they are wonderful thoughts. Very nicely expressed. Thanks for sharing.
Day 4: Dialogue Of Romance
appreciate your comment, Andy,thanks.
Just lovely verses. Very nice.
Sweepyjean, thank you for inspiring me.
“As she flits across your mind,
she leaves a bit of her soul behind.”
Sulekha, this is lovely! This lovely poem has your style written all over it. Beautiful choice of words that manage to invoke deep emotions! 🙂
Bella, Thanks for being such a great friend and supporter. My style is crazy 🙂
I love seeing you experiment with rhyme, Suleka. Very well done.
Jenni, we all improve with time, thanks
Fantastic, Sulekha. I absolutely love it.
Corinne, Thank you for visiting and for your wonderful compliment.
This is brilliant.
Beautiful imagery.
Dazediva, Thank you so much for your compliments.
Oh, I just love the second verse. I also love the rhyme and imagery throughout.
Thank you Leximagines, appreciate it.
I normally read the article, then leave my comment. Then and only then do I go back and read what others say. I cheated this time around, I read the article then comments. I love what RAAckerman said " It's the aftertaste that we recall". So true… I also believe it's what a women dreams will happen, it's what we long for. It's how we are left feeling when that one has decided to move on. For one moment in time we hope that we cross your mind…
Just my thoughts .. love it
Deb, Power of visualization 🙂 Yes we do feel like crossing the mind, one more time. Thanks for your lovely comment.
Oh wow! Even it is momentary let her her love you. Beautiful!
Thank you, Outlier.