This poem is written for the Wednesday Prompt at Write Tribe
Wednesday prompt –
Use the 6 body part idioms mentioned – to write a story/ a bit of non-fiction/ a poem.
Victory
We knew we would see eye to eye,
We had a gut feeling too.
Were confident won’t have,
egg on our faces,
if we stood up for what was right.
No one would give us,
a real kick in the teeth,
if we told the truth.
Yet we kept dragging our feet,
For several heartbeats.
We listened for crucial clues.
ear to the ground,
before gathering enough courage,
to stand up and fight.
By Sulekha Rawat
Very good use of idioms into this poem…
Reflections on A2Z Challenge-Random Thoughts Naba
Thank you so much, Nabanita.
Very good use of the idioms and
No one would give us,
a real kick in the teeth,
if we told the truth.
a good message here.
Thanks Kalpana, glad you liked it.
Nice poem utilizing the idioms 🙂
Thank you Swathi, it just came to me in an instant 🙂
Good job weaving all the idioms into your clever poem. ♥
I am a clever girl 🙂 No seriously, I loved the prompt and just wrote what came to my head, thank you so much.
Fantastic! This was not an easy prompt, but you incorporated it so well 🙂
Appreciate your lovely compliment.
This is great!! It flows nicely…
Thank you for visiting and writing such a nice comment.
How sweet, Sulekha! i noticed you were the first to post! Congrats! 😀
Thanks Vidya, I had to write the poem that sprang into my head on reading the prompt.
Very creative use if the prompts and such positive poem!
Learning from the master 🙂 your stories were amazing. Thanks
very beautifully used the idioms..:)
Thank you so much.
The idioms fit very well in the poem. Superb!
it fits all so well Sulekha! Loved the poem! 🙂
Intelligent use of idioms to craft a really nice poem!:)
aptly woven idioms into a fantastic poem
Broken Doors
Beautiful messages with appropriate usage of Idioms 🙂
http://pencilstripes.blogspot.com/2014/05/a-head-start-with-idioms.html
Great wisdom in your cleverly woven idioms. This was not an easy prompt.