My 55 fiction starting with Q in this blogging from A to Z challenge.
Quietly walking away, Shiva felt his heart crack. Sia was tying a handkerchief on Dev’s forehead while frantically trying to catch Shiva’s attention. Her helplessness undid his heartstrings, he had to help her. The siblings watched Shiva leave with mixed feelings; Dev with a triumphant smile while Sia’s bruised soul reflected in her stricken eyes.
By Sulekha Rawat
I am participating in the blogging from A to Z Challenge from 1-30 April, 2014 and this post is written as a part of that challenge. Check out some amazing participating blogs here. My theme for the challenge is 55 Fiction, stories in 55 words. I hope you enjoyed my story today. You can read the earlier parts of this story here.
So touching.. You have wonderfully described the pain in in just 55 words..
Oh no. Makes my heart sad too – sadness nicely brought out Sulekha.
I dislike Dev so much
Really feel for the two lovers…
So sad..why doesn’t Dev understand
R for Ready-Random Thoughts Naba
Oh how terrible! I feel for Sia, so deeply
…and now I feel so bad for Shiva.
Ohhh!! Feeling so terrible for both Sia and Shiva!!