My 55 fiction starting with Q in this blogging from A to Z challenge.
Quietly walking away, Shiva felt his heart crack. Sia was tying a handkerchief on Dev’s forehead while frantically trying to catch Shiva’s attention. Her helplessness undid his heartstrings, he had to help her. The siblings watched Shiva leave with mixed feelings; Dev with a triumphant smile while Sia’s bruised soul reflected in her stricken eyes.
By Sulekha Rawat
I am participating in the blogging from A to Z Challenge from 1-30 April, 2014 and this post is written as a part of that challenge. Check out some amazing participating blogs here. My theme for the challenge is 55 Fiction, stories in 55 words. I hope you enjoyed my story today. You can read the earlier parts of this story here.
So touching.. You have wonderfully described the pain in in just 55 words.. 🙂
Oh no. Makes my heart sad too – sadness nicely brought out Sulekha.
I dislike Dev so much 🙁 Really feel for the two lovers…
So sad..why doesn’t Dev understand
R for Ready-Random Thoughts Naba
Oh how terrible! I feel for Sia, so deeply 🙁
…and now I feel so bad for Shiva.
Ohhh!! Feeling so terrible for both Sia and Shiva!!