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  1. I love this haunting poem of yours Sulekha. Waiting can be exciting up to a point but when that wait does not seem to be fruitful it can be the most agonizing and painful

  2. I loved this. It's truth at its best. Favourite lines:

    "His eyes are still open,

    Coz he’s waiting to see her, just once again.

    And though his heart has stopped beating,

    his soul still willfully remains."

    I have to admit. I do adore good poetry. And yours is one of the best I've ever seen, Sulekha.

    Keep it up. Cheers. xx

  3. arvinder

    how true ……. i guess when you have your soulmate once in this lifetime ……u just can't let go of him/her……… very piognant.

    am really touched by ur poetry, sulekha.

    • Arvinder, I was at your blog and it's beautiful. I am your follower now πŸ™‚ soulmates are precious and waiting for them is a pleasure and pain blended together. Thank you for your lovely comment.

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